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School Year: 2009-2010
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My Changes in S1
Flat A, 7/23 Crescent RoaKowloo13 June 201
Dear ChrisHow are you? Do you feel great studying in secondary school this year? I feel very good. I’ve also changed a lot in the year. Let me share my feelings with you.My main changes can be divided into two aspects – behaviour and homework. Fir.........
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Mr. Wolf in Little Red Riding Hood
Hey, guys. Let me introduce myself. I’m the wolf in Little Red Riding Hood. Oh, don’t be frightened. I won’t eat you. Everyone misunderstands me and thinks I’m the worst wolf in the world. Actually, I always show kindness to everyone! Let me tell you my encounter with Little One windy a.........
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Love like tastes
Love is like tastesSweet, Sour, Bitter, SpicFour tastesFour stages.
SweetLove is sweet.When you find your loveSweet, a little bit.
SourLove is sour.When you lose your loverSour, very poor.
BitterLove is bitter.When you quarrel with your loverBitter. I think drinking herbal tea is better.
SpicyLove is spicy..........
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Karen and Lily – A Modern Fable
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Informal Letter
Flat A, 7/F23 Crescent RoadKowloon.
13 June 201Dear ChrisHow’re you doing? We’ve not seen each other since we got into the secondary schools. How’s your school life
After studying in Carmel Secondary School for one year, I’ve changed a lot. In the past, I went to the library with you and John.........
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Informal Letter
55 Chung Hau SHomantiKowlooDear Patrick
I’m glad that you’re planning to visit me --- oh, alright, Hong Kong.
You don’t have to worry about getting lost in Ocean Park as long as you’ve a few copies of the colourful directories. I have some advice: DO GO TO OCEAN PARK IN THE MORNING, BEC.........
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I love…I hate…
I love&Playing table tennisWhen I play itI feel so relaxed
I hate&Doing homeworkWhen I do homeworkI feel extremely tired
I love&Sleeping and having a napWhen I sleepI feel so comfortable
I hate&Doing examWhen I do examI feel quite nervous
I love&Playing computer gamesWhen I play themI feel very excited.........
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Give your opinions about school bullying
Nowadays, school bullying is very common in Hong Kong or even in the world. Last month, a girl from England committed suicide because of school bullying. The girl was beautiful but her classmates were jealous of her beauty. So they always laughede at her and played tricks on her but no one supported.........
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Family Spirit
One night, I was awakened by the sound of distant thunder. As I opened my eyes, I saw a white ghost floating around my bedroom. It was crying poorly. At first, I thought I was dreaming. I bit my finger as hard as I could to check if this hurt. I hoped it wasn’t painful because I never wanted i.........
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Give your opinions about eating outside school
Some students like going out for lunch but some of them like having lunch at school. Why do some students like to have lunch outside school? In this writing, I want to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having lunch at school and outside school.Students who like going out for lunch can have.........
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Do you like Hong Kong? Why?
Although I am not one of the Hong Kong people, I like Hong Kong very much. I was born in Taiwan and have lived there for a few years. When I can compare Hong Kong with Taiwan, I found more advantages of Hong Kong.
First, people in Hong Kong have got a higher English standard than those in Taiwan. I n.........
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A creative New Year tradition
At Chinese New Year, we always follow the tradition to celebrate the beginning of a year. The most popular custom is the married couples giving red packets to children or singles as blessing. Although the red packets are given out sincerely, what the adults get in return are only routine auspicious .........
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If you could change the sound of Carmel’s school bell, what would you change it to?
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If you could change the sound of Carmel’s school bell, what would you change it to?
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If you could change the sound of Carmel’s school bell, what would you change to?
The sound of Carmel’s school bell is too common. Many schools use this rhythm as their school bell. I have wanted to change it for a long time.The sound of the bell can be changed to “cock-a-doodle-doo”. That means the sound that a rooster makes. It can wake the students up humorously. T.........
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An Informal Letter
Ka Fai Buildin18 Queen RoadHo Man TiKowlooHong Kon23rd April, 201
Dear PatrickI'm glad to hear that you're coming to Hong Kong. I can introduce some places in Hong Kong for you and your family. I hope you'll have a good trip in Hong Kong.On Friday morning, I suggest you go to the Marine Land in .........
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An Exciting Moment in My Life
I am a calm person and there are not many exciting moments in my life.Yet, there was a really exciting moment that I could never forget.
It was in the early August of 2003.My parents, my brother and I were having a trip to Singapore.We woke up at six o’clock in the morning.We prepared everythin.........
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An Embarrassing Moment
An Embarrassing Momen
The most embarrassing moment that I have ever had happened several months ago.
It was a picnic day organized by my church. When we saw someone flying kites, we also wanted to fly the kite. My sister and I then asked my father to buy a kite for us. While we were lining up for the.........
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An Adventure Story with Santa Claus
One day, when I woke up, I found that myself was in somebody's home. I haven't seen that kind of furniture in my home. All the furniture was red in colour. Soon, I saw an old man sitting at a red colour chair . He had long, curry and white hair. He was wearing glasses and red clothes, red tr.........
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A Book Report
Book title: Charlie and The Chocolate FactorAuthor: Roald Dah
This is a good example of a good and lucky child, Charlie. He was the luckiest person in the world. Charlie’s family was very poor. One day, Charlie got a “lucky ticket” to Wonka Chocolate Factory and became rich.There were many dangerous .........
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A new hero
Our new super hero is Super Money Man
Super Money Man is a man who can change anything into money, such as soil, water and even rubbish. When his hands touch them, they will become money immediately.
Super Money Man always picks up rubbish from rubbish bins and changes them into money. Then, he will .........
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A Touching Moment in My Life
I celebrate my birthday with my parents nearly every year, except for this year’s birthday.This year I have got a special and touching birthday.
As it was the first year that I came to Carmel, no one knew my birthday. On my birthday, I went to school as usual. No one asked me ‘What present do y.........
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A Mirror, A Hope
A Mirror, A Hop
There was a poor village called Despair. People who lived there would never feel glad or pleased because they believed their ancestry had made a god feel angry and they were cursed by the god. A little girl called Elizabeth was very different from other villagers. She was very lively.........
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Write a letter to yourself in the future
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A Letter to Myself in the Future
Dear Myself 10 years from NowHow are you? It has been raining for so many days and finally the sun has come out. It was so humid. I hate rainy days.I think that after ten years you will be a student in university, who study Chinese, PE, or even English! I am not sure what you will choose. However, .........
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A frightening moment in my life
When I saw the photo that I took with my friends, I recalled a frightening moment in my life. It was my birthday.
On 30th October 2008, my friends Pius, Melody, Kelly, Shan and I went to Hong Kong Disneyland. We went on a lot of rides, such as Space Mountain, Buzz and merry-go-round. We also went int.........
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A boy who cried wolf
Once upon a time, there was a boy called Tommy. He was the naughtiest in the village. He always played tricks on the other villagers.
One day, he was so bored to play in the house, so he thought of an idea to play tricks on people… He used some red light to light the room, and then he shouted‘Fire! My house is on.........
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